Showing posts with label call to action. Show all posts
Showing posts with label call to action. Show all posts

Monday, March 19, 2012

Call to action examples

Who says I'm behind??  This comment asked for examples, and it was only 3 months ago. Anyway, Claire is referring to this post: http://edittorrent.blogspot.com/2011/12/call-to-action.html

Clare K. R. Miller said...

I mean, I'm still not sure what the call to action is, but at least I know it's not the same thing that seems like it should be as early in the story as possible. I wouldn't mind some examples of calls to action, if you have them on hand...



Okay, Claire. You were mentioning that the confusion might be between the "inciting incident/event" and the call to action. The inciting incident happens a bit earlier, and might not happen TO the protagonist (it could be just a general event). But the call to action is more often really aimed right at this character-- it's a call not to generalized action, but calling for specific action from this specific person. So:  




Inciting incident: The attack on Pearl Harbor and the declaration of war, leading to universal conscription.




Call to action: Johnny gets the draft letter addressed to him personally. 





More examples:  




Inciting incident: The homicide unit is called to the crime scene to see the dead body.



 Call to action: Detective Miller get a call from the police commissioner, asking to be kept informed.



Inciting incident: There's a notice posted for auditions for the class play. 
 Call to action: Best friend wants to try out but is nervous so begs Callie to come along.

Inciting incident: The doctor points out that the triglycerides are way up.  
Call to action: Mike goes the gym and passes the free-weight room, noticing how buff all the weightlifters are... and then catches sight of himself in the mirror... not buff.

Inciting incident: As predicted by the polls, Sarah wins the mayoral election.  
Call to action: Her first day on the job, the city comptroller confesses that the city is broke and won't make the next payroll unless Sarah finds $30K quick.

So....  The call to action is what specifically provides the incentive for the protagonist to start acting, going to the draft examination, taking a mortgage on her house to pay the city payroll, enrolling in a weight-training class, trying out for a part in the play, whatever the character  must do to get into there and start engaging the conflict and moving the plot. In the original post, I suggest that this be a new action, something he/she hasn't done before-- this isn't just another dead body, not just another day at the office.
Other examples? How about from your own stories?
Alicia