Friday, April 20, 2012

Editing a Sample at RU

Today at Romance University, we take a look at a sample that needed a bit of a scramble to fix the pacing and focus. This is the kind of edit that walks the line between content and line editing. Take a look!

2 comments:

Julie Harrington said...

I had to comment here and say how much I love these. They're so helpful and I love the hands on learning approach.

JT

Edittorrent said...

Theresa, this is amazing. You've really pinpointed something I sense but can't say-- the writer has changed the character in the change of focus between p. 1 and p. 2.

Alicia