The brains at Romance University thought it would be fun to show some line editing techniques in my columns. And they're right, this is fun. Volunteers send in their first two pages, and I randomly choose one and put it through the Theresa machine. We'll do this every other month (agent Sara Megibow will do the same in the gap months).
Today's entry was very well written, but there were a couple of edits that won't surprise long-time readers of this blog. You guys know what I do to the bling and the -ing!