tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post5930792690249599175..comments2023-09-05T12:51:25.656-05:00Comments on edittorrent: Sequencing againEdittorrenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-40627781343754734582008-12-19T18:00:00.000-06:002008-12-19T18:00:00.000-06:00Thanks.I wish I could do some online class with yo...Thanks.<BR/><BR/>I wish I could do some online class with you or something like that. I'd love to learn these skills.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-76712890643419026892008-12-19T14:36:00.000-06:002008-12-19T14:36:00.000-06:00That's good too. :) A lot of editing is actually ...That's good too. :) A lot of editing is actually reduction-- reducing a clause to a phrase, and a phrase to a word.Edittorrenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-44309821068752725732008-12-19T14:29:00.000-06:002008-12-19T14:29:00.000-06:00So does the sentence now read, "I'm going to teach...So does the sentence now read, "I'm going to teach this gullible fool a lesson"?<BR/><BR/>While the original had a nice cadence to it, I sort of like how charged this new sentence of mine is. Much more judgmental and almost greedy for that lesson to be taught.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.com