tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post324178724943425556..comments2023-09-05T12:51:25.656-05:00Comments on edittorrent: Getting the sequence of a sceneEdittorrenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-6054292953966899702009-06-29T10:54:11.861-05:002009-06-29T10:54:11.861-05:00You know, once you've written a draft, try out...You know, once you've written a draft, try outlining just the events to see if they are causally related. Often the better you write sentences and paragraphs, the harder it is to see scene-structure problems. So strip the scene down to an outline, and see if it needs re-ordering.<br />AliciaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-47164161981608682182009-06-29T10:44:16.147-05:002009-06-29T10:44:16.147-05:00This is so helpful, I love the examples. I thought...This is so helpful, I love the examples. I thought I understood sequence but I've got some "just because" scene changes that could definitely be pumped up by adding a more intriguing cause to the effect. Thanks!Alihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16745786643511417426noreply@blogger.com