tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post2355725310894746137..comments2023-09-05T12:51:25.656-05:00Comments on edittorrent: Complex or Confusing?Edittorrenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-85299117784839575682010-10-24T22:29:19.464-05:002010-10-24T22:29:19.464-05:00I don't know, Wes. He's young, right? I th...I don't know, Wes. He's young, right? I think ideals tend to yield to lust up to a certain age. :)<br />AliciaEdittorrenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-39036188016883133622010-10-23T11:10:14.389-05:002010-10-23T11:10:14.389-05:00Interesting post. I suppose most of these occuran...Interesting post. I suppose most of these occurances are from not following the through-line to its eventual conclusion.<br /><br />Possibly another way to use this technique/problem effectively would be to show conflicts within a character. I've thought of doing this in book three as my MC degenerates. He's opposed to slavery, yet he buys a hot young female slave for sex because of his deep lust. I'm concerned that this might be too dark, but writing is about art, isn't it? Of course, there is no guarantee I can pull it off artisticly. It would also drive a wedge between the MC and his good friend, a former slave, which could add some interesting conflict.Weshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03077791761104576436noreply@blogger.com