tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post8882291588769774282..comments2023-09-05T12:51:25.656-05:00Comments on edittorrent: Reinventing your book. 4: Reinventing the LengthEdittorrenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-80551288505390972612013-10-05T16:04:56.631-05:002013-10-05T16:04:56.631-05:00advice on editing.
I have two protagonists, PoV fl...advice on editing.<br />I have two protagonists, PoV flips between the two protagonists. All is present tense, first person.<br /><br /><<< The plot requires that the protagonist who has the PoV can only "hear" the non-PoV protagonist mentally. >>><br /><br />Q: how do you show this? I am currently doing, to allow corrective replacement:<br />the PoV Protagonist: " dialog "<br />the other Protagonist: << dialog >><br /><br />what ever you can assist, thanks, please feel free to put at bottom of what you are doing and/or adding<br /><br />many thanks!<br />terryterry sterkelnoreply@blogger.com