tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post6516956048411693447..comments2023-09-05T12:51:25.656-05:00Comments on edittorrent: WesEdittorrenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-27186867330085401862009-06-16T11:34:08.662-05:002009-06-16T11:34:08.662-05:00Mit, just think "modifiers". Adjectives ...Mit, just think "modifiers". Adjectives and adverbs are a good way to sneak in detail. Of course, that's easy to overdo. I always have to un-modify all my nouns and verbs, because I just strew those modifiers everywhere. :)<br /><br />Wes, I had to search for fixes, trust me. <br />AliciaEdittorrenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-8809024902953585282009-06-16T08:11:37.548-05:002009-06-16T08:11:37.548-05:00Amazing!!! How you can spot so many issues in fou...Amazing!!! How you can spot so many issues in four short sentences and then fix them so easily continues to astound me.<br /><br />Thanks again.Weshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03077791761104576436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-13725122164460024672009-06-16T08:04:12.634-05:002009-06-16T08:04:12.634-05:00That was a quick fix. I also must add a thank you ...That was a quick fix. I also must add a thank you for the time you are spending. We authors all need it.Jaymihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06359737278832672715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-50450317527008557952009-06-16T05:20:23.789-05:002009-06-16T05:20:23.789-05:00I like the way you keep pointing out how details c...I like the way you keep pointing out how details can be snuck into sentence. <br /><br />I am a person of 101 words - and each time I'm asked for "a little" detail to ground a scene I add a paragraph (or two or three).<br /><br />This is helpful ... and I assume usually the sort of thing a writer fixes in a 2nd draft, not in a first "let's get the story out" draft. Right?<br /><br />(BTW, I'm sure you are totally SHOCKED by the admission I am long winded.)Mithttp://mitmoi.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com