tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post6257189389572385327..comments2023-09-05T12:51:25.656-05:00Comments on edittorrent: Topic Sentences in FictionEdittorrenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-71331413140260376392008-05-30T19:19:00.000-05:002008-05-30T19:19:00.000-05:00Crazy Western Martian here... but that first go-ro...Crazy Western Martian here... but that first go-round with our paragraph created, for me, a sense of melancholy and tone. Why isn't that a helpful way to advance the story?Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.com