tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post4016080219016704193..comments2023-09-05T12:51:25.656-05:00Comments on edittorrent: Breaking RulesEdittorrenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-18056144556571662432008-10-17T00:25:00.000-05:002008-10-17T00:25:00.000-05:00I read a really funny list in Gargoyle by Andrew D...I read a really funny list in Gargoyle by Andrew Davidson.... you should read the book, it's very good!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-66848040851812699322008-10-16T10:30:00.000-05:002008-10-16T10:30:00.000-05:00By telling us what these soldiers carried, he tell...By telling us what these soldiers carried, he tells us about them. First, what they have in common. Then, what sets them apart, which will help readers to recall the individuals as well as identify with one or more of them. Finally, back to what they have in common, reminding us that they're a team, a unit.<BR/><BR/>I've awarded this blog the I LOVE YOUR BLOG award. Where else do I get lessons on participles? :) See more <A HREF="http://readinnwritin.blogspot.com/2008/10/i-love-your-blog-award-and-paying-it.html" REL="nofollow">here</A>.PatriciaWhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04572087157439187319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-42652674891909904302008-10-15T11:38:00.000-05:002008-10-15T11:38:00.000-05:00Don DeLillo does that Biblical list thing too-- de...Don DeLillo does that Biblical list thing too-- describing what college students unload from the car and carry into their dorm rooms. It's actually a comment on the terrible consumerism of our society.<BR/>AliciaEdittorrenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.com