tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post3209368215129306503..comments2023-09-05T12:51:25.656-05:00Comments on edittorrent: Your Embellished Sentences, Part 2Edittorrenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-86252448593259862192010-02-23T18:14:45.948-06:002010-02-23T18:14:45.948-06:00Look what happens when I'm on a hiatus from th...Look what happens when I'm on a hiatus from the internet! I am quoted in my favourite blog :D<br /><br />I'm catching up!<br />LeonaLeonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11786326364037397675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-68236373667783138872010-02-12T15:52:54.826-06:002010-02-12T15:52:54.826-06:00"Bones, is it--?"
"It's dead, J..."Bones, is it--?"<br />"It's dead, Jim."<br />"But it is logical."<br />Kirk and McCoy obliterate Spock in a phaser barrage.<br />"Beam us up, Scottie. We killed all the intelligent life down here."<br /><br />- Brought to you by the Society for Free AssociationDave Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00773380114295267509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-77632500869713691622010-02-12T15:32:07.610-06:002010-02-12T15:32:07.610-06:00the ubiquitous hand pushed through hair to signal ...<i>the ubiquitous hand pushed through hair to signal frustration or anger</i><br /><br />Or the young girl biting her bottom lip which drives me batty.<br /><br />I struggle with mannerisms though - I think I tend to avoid them for fear of doing some other version of hair-pushing and lip-biting without even realising. :(Sylviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05925593802209715440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-11900670510872461842010-02-11T22:20:04.814-06:002010-02-11T22:20:04.814-06:00Very clear examples in this post - thank you! I w...Very clear examples in this post - thank you! I wasn't unclear on anything in regards to this issue, but the examples still made me feel like I learned it <i>better</i>. :)<br /><br />Thanks!<br />Jami G.Jami Goldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00957122956518765455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-4384610015991775742010-02-11T19:15:38.790-06:002010-02-11T19:15:38.790-06:00These are great tips.
I never thought about chara...These are great tips.<br /><br />I never thought about character tags that much but now that I've read this post, I have to go back and check a one character in particular. He's a stranger for a couple of scenes.<br /><br />Mannerisms specific to a particular character is a good way to add dimension.Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.com