tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post3009788325520354456..comments2023-09-05T12:51:25.656-05:00Comments on edittorrent: Emotion postponementEdittorrenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-61667962177021378712009-12-28T21:55:36.776-06:002009-12-28T21:55:36.776-06:00Alicia:
This one's a keeper!
Thanks!
MurphyAlicia:<br /><br />This one's a keeper!<br /><br />Thanks!<br />MurphyRiley Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15817930302085699222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-45826653456609695742009-12-23T14:29:55.732-06:002009-12-23T14:29:55.732-06:00This comes at a perfect time for me--trying to get...This comes at a perfect time for me--trying to get that emotional twist in my final chapter--thanks!J.B. Chicoinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06894797553204276281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-91132613750320041552009-12-23T10:51:33.799-06:002009-12-23T10:51:33.799-06:00This post is a 15. (On a scale of 1 to 10.)
Thank ...This post is a 15. (On a scale of 1 to 10.)<br />Thank you.Patience-pleasehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13262203054740351060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-48966286063046096302009-12-23T10:14:29.448-06:002009-12-23T10:14:29.448-06:00I'm with Eva! I had a hard time choosing them....I'm with Eva! I had a hard time choosing them. I don't think all would have been an appropriate answer LOL<br /><br />That was well done. I like how you put things.Leonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11786326364037397675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-12722512746185800702009-12-23T08:38:52.991-06:002009-12-23T08:38:52.991-06:00It's funny - I had always tried to be concise ...It's funny - I had always tried to be concise in writing, not to wobble around, and to keep the action going. But guess what happened: When I started to revise my first draft, I found many places where I was rushing too much, and made notes like "take your time for the emotions here". I couldn't have explained what it was exactly - but now you did! Thanks a lot!MrsMusicnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-15467308810968245952009-12-23T07:08:09.151-06:002009-12-23T07:08:09.151-06:00How are we supposed to pick posts for the contest ...How are we supposed to pick posts for the contest is you keep writing more awesome ones?Eva Galehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08834856467514439544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-38641284703211136892009-12-22T23:37:46.026-06:002009-12-22T23:37:46.026-06:00Slow reveal-- great way to put it, Simon!
Alicia...Slow reveal-- great way to put it, Simon! <br />AliciaEdittorrenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-18078458277836401802009-12-22T15:51:49.257-06:002009-12-22T15:51:49.257-06:00Ouch. Call me a bit of a sap, but that one got me....Ouch. Call me a bit of a sap, but that one got me. Just the brief summary here was enough to clench my gut. The analysis was excellent, good lady.<br /><br />It's what I strive for in my own fiction: the slow reveal. Don't get to the emotional climax until it's as tightly strung as possible.<br /><br />Thanks for the refresher on how to delay effectively.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-19714842706886359082009-12-22T14:07:52.246-06:002009-12-22T14:07:52.246-06:00Wonderful post, thanks!Wonderful post, thanks!Merchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14164221022350926808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-64058531457844162802009-12-22T13:58:14.025-06:002009-12-22T13:58:14.025-06:00I am reminded of Aristotle, who made the point tha...I am reminded of Aristotle, who made the point that literature and drama let us cleanse by evoking emotion that we won't let ourselves feel in our own lives. <br /><br />aliciaEdittorrenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-18908396627037603292009-12-22T13:47:26.633-06:002009-12-22T13:47:26.633-06:00Tears are the cleansing rain of the psyche. I am ...Tears are the cleansing rain of the psyche. I am strange - I like them. I've seen what happens to people who refuse to shed them. ;) Enjoyment is a good word.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com