tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post2780455970700330263..comments2023-09-05T12:51:25.656-05:00Comments on edittorrent: Breaking Down the Two ChoicesEdittorrenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14295505709568570553noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-12680306183432995262008-05-15T15:26:00.000-05:002008-05-15T15:26:00.000-05:00You don't like cupcakes? Who in the world doesn't ...You don't like cupcakes? Who in the world doesn't like cupcakes? I agree though that with that ending the second paragraph gets my vote. <BR/>I've been re-editing my first manuscript and have been watching my paragraph structures as instructed, I'm wondering though if you can guide us on how to speed up the saggy middle. Thanks in advance.Natalie Hatchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09377665702278806398noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-22442735954847765992008-05-15T10:33:00.000-05:002008-05-15T10:33:00.000-05:00Excellent exercise, especially because you chose o...Excellent exercise, especially because you chose opposite what I expected. But your analysis supports your choice. <BR/><BR/>Thanks.PatriciaWhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04572087157439187319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-40102106365700160052008-05-14T22:39:00.000-05:002008-05-14T22:39:00.000-05:00Thank you so much for taking the time to analyze m...Thank you so much for taking the time to analyze my openings. The feedback was invaluable!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6824896765631412903.post-11648381599478709952008-05-14T18:28:00.000-05:002008-05-14T18:28:00.000-05:00This was a very cool exercise, and I'm glad you le...This was a very cool exercise, and I'm glad you let us do it. Thanks. And thanks to everyone for keeping it civil and focused, too. <BR/><BR/>(btw, Natalie asked if there wasn't a size 12 book. She's good -- Meg Cabot wrote Size 12 is not Fat.)Susan Helene Gottfriedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.com